Gay Erotic Stories

I've received some great feedback on my new gay erotic story, The Only Night. Spent most of the morning revamping things.

Two biggies:

1. A tad more dialog in the beginning 
2. Hot new steamy sex scene

I'm approaching 4200 words on what was to be a 2500 word story. The ending my change just a little...it could lead to a part two. The jury is still out. Going to see where the writing takes me today and will decide later. Hoping to have this published by the end of the week.

And this...